- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:25, 21 July 2019 (UTC)
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Lloyd Pollock
- ... that Canadian sportsman Lloyd Pollock was called "one of the greatest things that ever happened to Windsor athletics"? [1]
- Reviewed: Véronique Aka
- Comment: Special occasion request for anniversary of July 26 birth date
Created by Flibirigit (talk). Self-nominated at 07:45, 3 July 2019 (UTC).
Substantial article on excellent sources, no copyvio obvious. - Sorry, I would not be hooked. "sportsman" seems overly general, "ice hockey" would be more specific, and "greatest ever" is not my cup of tea, and then to something I never heard of, while he was instrumental in national and international organizations. Please. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:41, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- The generic term sportsman is correct in this situation due to the subject's involvement in softball and hockey, and since he was being honoured by a sports hall of fame and not a hockey hall of fame. Flibirigit (talk) 14:18, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you, understand - but this could mean gymnast, boxer, fencer ... - no? How about a hook that is more specific and avoids the one-person-point-of-view thing? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:59, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
- I think we're going to agree to disagree on this one. A generic hook is more appealing to a broad audience, rather than a hockey-specific hook. By not mentioning the sport, it would entice readers to click the link to find out what he did. Flibirigit (talk) 15:19, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
I have no problems approving it for you, but I would not be tempted to click, - that's all. I don't believe that only hockey-interested people would read if hockey is mentioned. Sometimes I'd like to try two hooks on a subject to test responses ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:51, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
- I think we're going to agree to disagree on this one. A generic hook is more appealing to a broad audience, rather than a hockey-specific hook. By not mentioning the sport, it would entice readers to click the link to find out what he did. Flibirigit (talk) 15:19, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you, understand - but this could mean gymnast, boxer, fencer ... - no? How about a hook that is more specific and avoids the one-person-point-of-view thing? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:59, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
