Template:Did you know nominations/Harry K. Newburn
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:03, 8 November 2014 (UTC)
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Harry K. Newburn
edit- ... that while on the faculty of Arizona State University, Harry K. Newburn served as the acting president of Cleveland State University?
- Reviewed: Manleluag Spring Protected Landscape
Created by Raymie (talk). Self nominated at 20:29, 25 October 2014 (UTC).
Length ok, hook cited. APK whisper in my ear 05:22, 28 October 2014 (UTC)
This review needs more details, in accordance with DYK review instructions. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at DYK Reviewing guide. Yoninah (talk) 15:49, 29 October 2014 (UTC)
- Every tick gets ticked (copyvio, length, date, tone, number of tears shed), except some sourcing issues. The second paragraph in the 'Life' section has one reference at the beginning, and then nothing for the rest of the sentences. Similar issue with the claim that he was the 13th president. For the claim, I'm sure that'll take less than 2 seconds but I'd kind of like @Raymie: to pick one because #6, which I would have automatically copied, leads to a page that doesn't have the information available to hand. It's just a general splash page for lots of links. Could that also be changed? PanydThe muffin is not subtle 17:49, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
- Source 6 is actually a book from the university (I've added a page number), and I've added an improved citation in those areas as well. The second paragraph is all cited to the one source from Oregon, but I've cited the final sentence to improve it. Raymie (t • c) 18:55, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
- - Checks out! Big darn tick from me. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 19:47, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
