- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 01:02, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
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Dennis L. Riley
edit- ... that after proposing a bill requiring Atlantic City casinos to have table games with a $2 minimum bet, Dennis L. Riley was kicked out of two, which claimed he was card counting in blackjack?
- ALT1 ... that after sponsoring a bill requiring Atlantic City casinos to have table games with a $2 minimum bet, Dennis L. Riley was kicked out of two, which claimed he was card counting in blackjack?
- Reviewed: The Life and Death of John Gotti
Created by Alansohn (talk). Self-nominated at 21:21, 14 September 2016 (UTC).
@Alansohn: Date and length fine. However I do have a quibble with the hook. The hook claims he proposed the bill but the article says he sponsored it which I am not too sure are synonymous in political terms. I'd feel much more comfortable if the hook was more consistent with the article before I pass this. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 19:00, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
- @The C of E:, fair enough. I've added ALT1, above using "sponsoring" (rather than "proposing"), and still stayed under the hook limit. Alansohn (talk) 19:18, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
Much better. Hook 199 characters, QPQ done, no close paraphrasing. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 19:22, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
