Talk:Zaidee Jackson
Latest comment: 1 year ago by 2A00:23C6:E287:D201:A8BD:117B:3AB6:7BF6 in topic Copyediting, sourcing, lead etc
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Copyediting, sourcing, lead etc
editI've copyedited as far as the end of the section headed "French and British career (1928–1933)". The rest of the article still needs copyediting.
I've added to the lead and removed the lead too short tag, but think the lead is still missing a statement about why Jackson is notable. The amount of detail in the main body of the article also ends up making her actual notability obscure.
Article is extremely poorly-sourced. I have tagged it with possible original research. Tacyarg (talk) 20:34, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for what you've done with this I know one thing that makes her notable, and that's the quality of her voice on a very worn 78 record I have just played. More when logged in... 2A00:23C6:E287:D201:A8BD:117B:3AB6:7BF6 (talk) 14:37, 4 October 2023 (UTC)