Talk:Wieferich prime/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Toshio Yamaguchi in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:46, 7 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    What does "≡" means? If and only if? And "∤" means "restriction to"?
    "≡" in the context of this article denotes a congruence on the integers. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    "∤" here means "does not divide" (it is listed at List of mathematical symbols#Symbols). -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    I wikilinked the symbol "∤" to an article where it is explained. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 18:32, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    "log log x" a word too much or intentional?
    This is intentional. It denotes the logarithm of the logarithm of x. I added parentheses for clarity here. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Similar uncommon units should be linked
    What in particular do you think should be linked? -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 18:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Can you explain what does the small omega in the second table refers to? If you do this I am happy to pass this article.
    Explained in this edit. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 20:21, 11 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Red links should be created or explained in the article (for example, I don't know what a "Catalan pseudoprime" is)
    Redlinks First case of Fermat's last theorem and Catalan pseudoprime eliminated by creating those articles. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 20:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Non-english sources should be labelled as such.
    Done. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 19:25, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Suggest to remove the red links in the reference section, as it is unlikely they will be created.
    Done. -- Toshio Yamaguchi (tlkctb) 19:46, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Overall ok
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall: On hold to give you time fixing the problems.--GoPTCN 11:43, 8 May 2012 (UTC) PassReply
    Pass/Fail:  

(Note): My common practice is to paste the template into the GAN. I often check points 5 and 6 (stability and pictures) before reviewing because they are easy to check. "Neutral" is confusing, as it may also mean that I did not review this points. Ok, now I will resume my review :)--GoPTCN 11:14, 8 May 2012 (UTC)Reply