Promotional, unverifiable, primary, and non-notable information

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While it seems clear the subject is an accomplished individual who passes BLP notability guidelines, this article contains an egregious amount of promotional, unverifiable, primary, and non-notable information with unnecessarily verbose coverage. Neutrality and COI from major editors is obviously a concern, so any addition or replacement of content should NOT be done by the editors Zaraclip, BlueImpact, and potentially others. Some immediate fixes - remove primary or uncited sources and descriptions of single mentions or minor appearances in media, as well as condense "Pop culture" into more appropriate sections for this subject's notability criteria.

In short, a large amount of information contained in this article (minor press appearances, unverified individual angel investments) is not appropriate for Wikipedia and should instead be used for a personal promotional website or LinkedIn profile for the subject. The article requires independent (not from previous major contributors) cleanup to address violations of numerous Wikipedia guidelines (see https://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Wikipedia:Template_messages/Cleanup for examples of more). Again, nothing against this subject, but at present this article has multiple issues. New issues tags may be added, but the current ones should not be removed without independent cleanup and review. Thanks for reading. Bayern71 (talk) 21:28, 10 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Note:I have removed the tags from the talk page (they are not meant to be here). I have also taken the liberty of creating a section for this discussion --Lemongirl942 (talk) 05:25, 11 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Agreed Genetikbliss (talk) 22:45, 3 August 2018 (UTC)Reply