Talk:Tuvalu at the Olympics

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
Good articleTuvalu at the Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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October 27, 2017Good article nomineeListed
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists)  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

General

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  • All mentions of "100 m" and its variants need to be written as "100 metres" in the prose for example. --  Done

National Olympic Committee

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  • Can you clarify who Robert Laupula is? --I believe the sentence clarifies it well enough? If not, could you give me an example?
  • "TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games" - rewrite to The TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games --  Done
  • " Isala T. Isala is currently the secretary general," Think Isala T. Isala is the current secretary general would be an improvement over the current version. --  Done

2012 Summer Games

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  • "and Manoa set a national record in the event." - clarify for readers that Manoa set a national record in the women's 100 metres dash. --Sounds a bit awkward, but done.

You've made a good effort on this so far. On hold until the issues have been resolved. MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 26 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: See above. Dat GuyTalkContribs 20:48, 26 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
@DatGuy: Looking back with who Robert Laupula is, I believe that is now a non-issue. With that said this article can now be promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)Reply