Talk:The X-Files season 3/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:37, 2 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'll be reviewing this one! TBrandley 17:37, 2 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • Add "American" before "science fiction"
  • Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
  • "Federal Bureau of Investigation" shorten to "FBI"
  • "attained ratings much higher" words like "much higher" don't represent a neutral point of view, and therefore must be removed or sourced/quoted by some notable person
  • "1995–1996" WP:YEAR violation "1996" should be "96"
  • "mostly positive" mostly should be "generally"
  • ""The Blessing Way"" comma at end
  • Crew header not needed because that's the only one
  • "1995–96 television season" should all be linked into that, not just "1995-96"
  • Speaking of this, as it is linked here, link it in the lede as well
  • "The X-Files's" remove last "'s"
  • "A-" WP:DASH concern, hypten should be an en-dash
  • "for a Series for the episode" too many "for" there
  • I made some WP:DASH and WP:MOSNUM fixes myself by a script
  • "The X-Files Wiki" italics for "The X-Files"
  • Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria, though I've gone further. Well done! TBrandley 02:13, 8 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Donearoo. Bruce Campbell (talk) 04:36, 8 November 2012 (UTC)Reply
Great, then, I'll pass it! TBrandley 16:12, 10 November 2012 (UTC)Reply
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