Talk:The Lich

GA Review

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 09:33, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I am taking a look and making some straightforward copyedits as I go. I'll jot questions/issues below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:33, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

• Earwig's copyvio clear

• The episode guest stars Lou Ferrigno as the hero Billy, and Ron Perlman as the Lich - this sentence is in the present tense whereas those around it are in past tense.

• I believe that this is pretty standard usage.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:32, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

• Maybe, but definitely looks odd with sentences around it in past tense. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:56, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

• I switched "stars" to "starred". Does that read better? I know it's only a minor change.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:23, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

*In the opening scene, Herpich used unicorn symbolism, most notably the tapestry The Unicorn is in Captivity and No Longer Dead, a piece of the seven-part tapestry The Hunt of the Unicorn, to illustrate the themes of the episode - this sentence is hard to follow with all teh commas. I'd write it as, "In the opening scene, Herpich used unicorn symbolism, most notably the tapestry The Unicorn is in Captivity and No Longer Dead—a piece of the seven-part tapestry The Hunt of the Unicorn—to illustrate the themes of the episode" :*Good point. Changed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:32, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

• This book, Adventure Time and Philosophy discusses Farmworld. Some discussion of that would be helpful here.

• I'll take a peek, but Farmworld only really comes up in the next episodes.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:32, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

• Yeah, but there is some segments from farmworld in this episode, so should be mentioned. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:56, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

• I'll have to ILL that book or something, because unfortunately, I cannot access it through Google Books.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:24, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

• Never mind, I got through to it. To be entirely honest, this section pertains almost exclusively to "Finn the Human", and I'm not sure how I'd integrate it into this article. Do you have any ideas?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:26, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

• One way would be to put a footnote at the end of the first sentence in the third para of the Plot section using the 'efn' template, like I have done in many articles such as pyxis etc. Then in the footnote, mention farmworld (alternate reality where the cataclysm doesn't happen) and use the book as a ref. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

• How is this?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:40, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

• looks good. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 16:17, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

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5. Reasonably stable?

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Pass or Fail: -a nice little read... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 16:17, 2 February 2018 (UTC)