Talk:The Last of the Starks
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Voice in Daenerys' head
editDuring the banquet, while Daenerys is being "uncomfortable" with the praise given to Jon, we can hear "burn them all" while the sound gets all muffled. This is in the episode, and I see very few people talking about it. I don't know that it warrants being inserted into the episode plot summary, but it might be a worthwhile addition when the last two episodes are out, because I believe this is the first occasion where we have concrete evidence of Daenerys' madness. Which will surely play a pivotal role in the last two episodes. -9 May 2019
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change: Gendry talks to Arya outside and asks him to marry her, but she tells him that she is not a lady. to: Gendry talks to Arya outside and asks her to marry him, but she tells him that she is not a lady. 97.102.97.234 (talk) 04:02, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
- Done Changed. Whoops, my bad! QueerFilmNerdtalk 04:26, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
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In the section labeled "At Winterfell", there are several grammatical and/or spelling errors that need correction. The reference words are in all caps (instead of quotes) for clarity. The other sections have not been put up yet as of this edit request. 1.) In the phrase "The North burn the dead on funeral pyres with Jon then gives a speech.."; the word WITH should be replaced with a period. 2.) In the phrase "Later, in the dining hall, Danerys points out.." Daenerys is misspelled. 3.) In the phrase "After Tyrion asks if Brienne if she was a virgin..", the word WAS should be replaced by IS for verb tense continuity. 4.) In the phrase "Arya and Sansa tell Jon about their mistrust in Daenerys in which Jon tells them of his parentage", IN WHICH should be replaced by ", AND". 5.) In the references section, the HBO link provided is a dead link. Itsdevo (talk) 04:18, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
- Done Done, thank you! QueerFilmNerdtalk 04:29, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
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There are some major grammatical errors in the section "At King's Landing" that need to be corrected. 1.) The phrase "...and both Cersei and Daenerys demands the other surrender" uses an incorrect verb tense. There should NOT be an "S" at the end of the word "DEMANDS". 2.) In the phrase "..Tyion attempts to appeal to Cersei's humanity..", TYRION is misspelled. Itsdevo (talk) 04:31, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
- Done Thank you :) QueerFilmNerdtalk 04:47, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
Locations
editI think that the summary reads better if the location headers are there. This would also be consistent with the other episodes. Can the headers be replaced? Thoughts? Einbierbitte (talk) 02:25, 7 May 2019 (UTC)
The Starbucks Cup
editNothing added to this page about the Starbucks cup? definitely news worthy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.3.177.215 (talk • contribs) 15:42, 7 May 2019 (UTC)
- It's mentioned under filming. QueerFilmNerdtalk 21:46, 7 May 2019 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 8 May 2019
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I would like to add some more information on the reception of the episode. Adding more information about the reviews this episode got TheHipHopEditor (talk) 17:35, 8 May 2019 (UTC)
- You can suggest edits here on this talk page by writing "please change X to Y", citing reliable sources. Just reopen this request :) – Þjarkur (talk) 17:52, 8 May 2019 (UTC)