Add suggestions here...
- evolution of suicide, why do we have suicidal feelings at all? whats the science behind it?
- add section summarizing History of suicide.
- Clean up the introduction, which is currently disjointed (reads like a list of loosely-connected facts about the subject) and has bad style (excessive passive voice, tense changes, etc.)
- Smoking as being correlative to suicide might come across as quite misleading. It's much more likely that those who are stressed, perturbed or contemplating potential suicide might actually turn to cigarettes as a vice........ there would be correlation in that way, rather than assuming that cigarettes causes some sort of suicidal reaction, which would be farfetched. the comments in this section are obviously not parallel to the other problematic addictions / disorders leading to extreme actions.
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