Talk:Spirit Squad

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
Good articleSpirit Squad has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSpirit Squad is the main article in the Spirit Squad series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 7, 2010Good article nomineeListed
April 27, 2010Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:28, 6 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall this is a pretty good article, though I do have some issues:

  • "The Spirit Squad was a professional wrestling tag team in World Wrestling Entertainment (WWE) based on the Raw brand, and in WWE's developmental territory Ohio Valley Wrestling (OVW)." I would split this into two sentences, with the second noting its brand. If it looks bad split we can reverse it of course.
  • "DX played various sophomoric pranks on the Squad and the McMahons" Adding in a couple examples might help beef up the article and make for interesting reading.

Everything else checks out, so I'll put this on hold and pass upon completion. Only a couple things so it won't take long. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:28, 6 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:52, 6 February 2010 (UTC)Reply
No problem. Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:48, 7 February 2010 (UTC)Reply