Talk:Sohawa Tehsil

baiwal is part of Sohawa is it not?

Issues with this stub

There are several issues evident with this stub:

1. It contains grammatical errors;
2. The phraseology is not of a standard consistent with how an entry should be written for inclusion in Wikipedia (and by extension, not entirely consistent with norms of contemporary, written speech evident in-vogue at the time of writing);
3. There is evidence of bias on the part of the contributor(s), i.e. the first person is used, exposing the expression of opinions;
4. No references are provided for the numerous assertions made throughout the article;
5. The coverage of material concentrates heavily on specific aspects of the subject matter, while not making this immediately clear to the reader - consider use of headings;
6. The formatting of text is not consistent, e.g. line and paragraph breaks;
7. Consider the use of photographs or external links to make the page more informative.
8. This stub is about Sohawa not Bishandaur. Bishandaurs has its own Prominance and should have a seperate thread. Do not concentrate on one family who does not even live in Sohawa.

Note:baiwal is in Tehsail GujarKhan Distt Rawalpindi

Picture

Why is the picture in the infobox a lotus for this article? RJFJR (talk) 21:56, 4 March 2011 (UTC)