Talk:Sleeping Beauty (1959 film)/GA3

GA Review

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Nominator: De Disney (talk · contribs) 13:08, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)

I'll review this after work today. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)

@Wolverine X-eye: I just wanted to remind you of this review. Best, voorts (talk/contributions) 23:58, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

@De Disney: 😬 It's the 29th...I think I will continue with this review tomorrow, unless work gets in the way, which is often the case. I apologize for being an asshole, but work has been overwhelming and has taken a huge toll on my mental health. I'm really, really sorry for dragging you down. I'll try by all means to make things right. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 20:03, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

Don't worry, I understand, I can also be very busy because of work. Take as much time as you need to do this. De Disney (talk) 13:27, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

Besides, it gives me enough time to fix any potential issues that you list in your review. De Disney (talk) 13:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

@Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- asilvering (talk) 17:05, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

Please take note of the message on top of my user page. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 18:00, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

@Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:36, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

I know. Just give me 4 days. I need to complete some very important off-wiki projects. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 17:34, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this tomorrow. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 19:32, 23 November 2024 (UTC)

@Wolverine X-eye: it's been nearly a month since your review. There's no shame on letting someone else take up the mantle, you clearly have more important things to do. May I suggest that you just put up a second opinion note requesting another experienced reviewer to take over or something? Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 04:58, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

I wouldn’t say no shame, it’s important to at least have some dignity with respect to time management. Wolverine continues to edit despite the pings, so he doesn’t care enough about this review to continue it here. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 05:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

I've only made one edit, besides this one, after being pinged and it was after your reply, so please avoid such assumptions. With regards to this review, I'm a bit busy with other stuff at the moment, so I think I'll allow another reviewer to have a go at this. From a personal standpoint, this isn't the biggest priority for me and I'd hate to keep the nominator waiting. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 06:11, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

Prose

• who was cursed by the evil fairy Maleficent to die from a prick from the spindle of a spinning wheel. This could be better phrased
• Merryweather uses her gift to weaken the curse; Aurora will instead fall into a deep sleep until true love's kiss breaks the spell. Unclear
• Still fearful, Stefan orders all the kingdom's spinning wheels burned. There should be a "be" or "to be" before burned
• The fairies move into a forest cottage, giving up magic and living as peasants, and rename Aurora to Briar Rose. the part after "and" is ungrammatical
• and tell her she cannot see the man again. Ungrammatical

Image review

• Images are appropriately licensed.

Second opinion from Dxneo

Sheesh that was a long read. Not sure if I should give my opinion since the initial reviewer is not done yet.

• So far, only inaccuracy I noticed was that cover image doesn't have an apt text.
• The media under Animation needs an alt text too.
• The media on Character animation needs an alt text.
• I also noticed File:Sleeping Beauty - 1958 Teaser Trailer.ogg which was adapted from YouTube. However, the current YouTube version is not under Creative Commons and the archives are somehow dead. Would you please help me verify the licensing of this file?
• While we are on the media files, is there a reason why there are so many non-free media files on this article? I suggest removing some and leave at least two including the cover image obviously.
• I noticed quotes on Animation, Story development, and Production delays. I suggest a minimal use of the quotation template, at least use quotation marks and attribution.
• "magnificent achievement, offering suspense, action and happy humor, in a truly giant-size package." ===> "magnificent achievement, offering suspense, action and happy humor, in a truly giant-size package." — The period comes after the quotation mark. Please do this on each and every quote, I just noticed a few of them.
• Keep WP:REFBOMB to a minimum on Animation, Legacy.

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That's all I got for you for now. Wolverine X-eye, this GAC has been up for months, any reason why it isn't closed? dxneo (talk) 02:26, 8 December 2024 (UTC)

I suggest you read the comments above for more information. Wolverine X-eye ^{(talk to me)} 16:02, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

I did, and I honestly don't feel like the current state of the article is fit to be GA. However, it's up to you mate. dxneo (talk) 18:19, 11 December 2024 (UTC)