Talk:Sir Harry Smith Community College

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Candorwien in topic Still terribly written

In your opinion maybe!

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"The school was most notable for its racing car project, headed by Mr. Kneeshaw. Mr. Kneeshaw and his team of mechanics are building a biofuel car to be entered into the 2008 Silverstone 24 hour race."

In my opinion it was most notable for the hovercraft project headed by teacher Steven Skews. Mr Skews and his team of mechanics created a Class II Kevlar based Hovercraft which they raced throughout Europe including Lake Balaton in Hungary.

A lot of bias needs to be removed from the article and citations used. --Candy (talk) 23:11, 11 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

Still terribly written

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Dell as state-of-the-art IT equipment. Hardly! SOmeone needs to clean up the hyperbole and add references. Candy (talk) 23:44, 14 July 2011 (UTC)Reply