Talk:Sedra Bistodeau

Latest comment: 6 years ago by UnkleFester in topic Article needs rewriting for improvements

Article needs rewriting for improvements

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I started to add paragraphs to this article to separate the information a bit, and realized that the information is interwoven throughout the article. Cleanup would involve sequencing this information over time, or by category of music, over time. Right now it is a pretty confusing read. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section as the intro does not communicate the Wikipedia:Notability information effectively. UnkleFester (talk) 22:22, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply