Talk:Scrat/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: PrimalMustelid (talk · contribs) 06:28, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 1989 (talk · contribs) 07:21, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

• Per WP:COPYVIOEL, the link to the Ice Age artbook in the first citation should be removed.
  • Removed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• If you’re going to use quotes, it should attributed to the person speaking, e.g. non naturalistic
  • Cited author. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• The Background section shouldn’t be there as it’s WP:UNDUE: It’s primarily about Blue Sky and their movies, nothing about the character.
  • Very well, removed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• pull out that of a squirrel could be worded better
  • Reworded. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• confirmed Wedge's account could be worded better
  • Reworded. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• golden age of American animation is quite vague. There were no explicit examples?
  • Unfortunately no, Wedge did not specify any specific character or franchise as an inspiration for Scrat. If it helps, I added "squash and stretch" since Wedge said that those were the kinds of characters that he derived Scrat sequences from. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• then opting to keep him could be worded better
  • Done. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• I think a visual of the Sqrat squirrel could be helpful for the reader, as I'm not sure how Mickey Mouse helps with that.
  • Yeah you're right. Swapped Mickey image for a Sqrat image instead, since he is a major part of the subsection. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• Supersonic, revealed that Supersonic seems repetitive
  • Swapped "Supersonic" for "she." PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• make a deal to make this too.
  • Fixed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• Fox lawyers had outfoxed Is there a pun to this?
  • Oops, wrote that as a joke in my own sandbox and forgot to change that. Changed to "outpaced." PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• the point that she her
  • Fixed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• helped him to plan out his personality and role The wording is implying this is about the director.
  • Specified Scrat regarding personality and role. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• In regard to the 2012 could be worded better.
  • Fixed the sentencing. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• The Ice Age section title should be italicized.
  • Italicized. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• Scrat is accidentally stepped and A word is missing.
  • Added "on." PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• moving in near the end of the film This is confusing.
  • Specified. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• one acorn to hit him from the ground Could this be clarified?
  • Done. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• File:Musée Grévin (septembre 2024) 01.jpg should be removed.
  • Removed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• That of Diego ???
  • Reworded. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• made slapsticks involving him accessible to audiences What does this mean?
  • Wording was vague, reworded. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• The last sentence of the second paragraph needs to be reworked.
  • Sure, does the reworded sentence work better?
• coauthors Something is missing.
  • I'm not sure I understand what is missing exactly. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
• Punctuations like commas should be outside quotes.
  • Sure, moved all punctuations outside quotes. PrimalMustelid (talk) 00:48, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

1989 (talk) 20:18, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

• @1989 Think I addressed everything except for one concern which I'm confused about (the coauthors one). If there's anything else I need to do, let me know. PrimalMustelid (talk) 01:06, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

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