Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
• "in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
• "held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"

Background

• Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
• "for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
• "in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink

Before Eurovision

Internal selection

• Video is a neat addition!
• "a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source

This is covered by WP:CALC, similar to how we keep using "x days later". Grk1011 (talk) 15:05, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

• "On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
• Remove target on snippets
• Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
• Wikilink pre-order
• Target dance to Dance music
• "Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
• "the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
• "program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
• Remove comma after "Maybe"
• "so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
• "of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
• Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets

I don't understand this one? Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Grk1011 I meant to put add the release year in brackets. --K. Peake 16:04, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Done. Grk1011 (talk) 17:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Promotion

• "they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
• "staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
• "staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
• "in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."

At Eurovision

• Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
• "was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
• "for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
• Img looks good!
• "she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
• "with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
• "was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
• Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014#Grand final
• "San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
• [1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
• "In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
• "marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
• "both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
• "were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"

Voting

• "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014." → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, respectively."
• "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013 Michele Perniola." → "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013, Michele Perniola."

Points awarded to San Marino

• The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)

Points awarded by San Marino

• Good

Detailed jury voting results

• The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits

References

• Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%!!!
• Nice job using the tool to archive!
• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 27

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am going to sleep soon so this won't be a same day pass like your others unfortunately. --K. Peake 21:30, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

I have made the requested edits. One question above though. Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

• Grk1011 Sorry about the initial confusion before I cleared it up, ✓ Pass! --K. Peake 18:00, 8 February 2021 (UTC)