Talk:Sammy Rogers

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Raintheone in topic GA Review

More detail needed

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As you can probably tell, I stopped watching Brookside while this character was still in the show - so my knowledge fades away to being non-existent at the end - I'd be grateful if someone more knowledgeable can add or amend. Niki2006 (talk) 22:00, 20 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Image

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Could we get an image of the character in the infobox? DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 03:14, 28 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

  DoneRain the 1 22:40, 31 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Basic stuff and comments

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  • "were auditioning" → "was auditioning" (referring to the entire show; both uses)  Done
  • "through out" → "throughout"  Done
  • "the Sammy" → "Sammy" (person; both uses)  Done
  • Quotes in the lead need references per WP:QUOTE.  Done
  • Overall, every single quote in the article needs to have a reference recited per WP:QUOTE.  Done
  • "She was successful and was called back to screen test auditions alongside other cast members Lindsay was then contacted her via telephone to offer her the role" feels like a run-off sentence and "Lindsay was then contacted her via" sounds off.  Done
  • "she dealt with dealt with" → "she dealt with"  Done
  • "in hospital" → "in the hospital"  Done
  • Add a period after "Dr".  Done
  • "Valentines Day" → "Valentine's Day"  Done
  • "break-up" → "break up"  Done
  • "night club" → "nightclub"  Done
  • "the couples first major storyline" → "the couple's first major storyline"  Done
  • "when Owen awake" → "when Owen awakes" or "when Owen is awake"  Done
  • "wheel chair" → "wheelchair"  Done
  • In #Relationship with Owen Daniels, add commas after "He added", "In addition", and "absence".  Done
  • Add commas after "Following her return" and "Upon her return".  Done
  • "paired the together" doesn't sound right.  Done
  • Add a comma after "He added" in #Reception.  Done
  • Archive sources, especially from Newspapers.com since a change in the title can result in their links not working.  Done
Thank you for the review. I will complete the remaining two points later today.Rain the 1 06:58, 2 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
I have just finished archiving all sources via the wayback machine.Rain the 1 15:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

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(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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