- This review is transcluded from Talk:Rhode Island Route 4/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Comments:
- "numbered state highway", two wikilinks should not be touching, I would suggest removing the link to Numbered routes in Rhode Island.
- Removed link
- Do not use "then" in describing progression of route in route description.
- Removed occurrence
- The sentence "After Exit 8, the mainline of the highway defaults onto Interstate 95 north, where Route 4 terminates" sounds awkward.
- After Exit 8, the mainline of the highway defaults onto Interstate 95 north. Route 4 terminates at the intersection with Interstate 95.
- The entire route description is sourced from Yahoo Maps. Can any other sources be added?
- I added a source from RIDOT to describe the Route 403 merge/Exit 7.
- Is the distance between Exit 5 and 6 1.5-metre (0.0015 km)? The exit list does not seem to indicate that.
- No, that was a typo in the convert template ("m" instead of "mi")
- Comma not needed in sentence "Construction began in 1983, and was completed five years later."
- Removed
- Shields should not be in the colspan notes denoting the beginning and end of the route.
- Removed
- "northbound exit and southbound entrance; mainline continues northbound as I-95" (last note in notes column): first "northbound" should be capitalized.
- Done
I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 01:16, 15 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
- Thanks for the review! Cheers, Rai•me 02:39, 15 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
- I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 03:10, 15 July 2009 (UTC)Reply