Talk:Now is Not the End/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 18:43, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Grabbing this for a review. Looks pretty close to being spot on from a quick skim, so I'm doubtful my comments will be anything more than minor nitpicks. Miyagawa (talk) 18:43, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- A few duplicate links, but nothing major:
- Peggy Carter in the first line of Development
- Edwin Jarvis, Howard Stark and Anton Vanko in the first paragraph of Casting
- Captain America in the second paragraph of Casting
- Roxon Energy Corporation in Marvel Cinematic Universe tie-ins
- Casting: "Anton Vanko was previously portrayed by Yevgeni Lazarev in Iron Man 2. Ronin plays a younger version of the character" - In order to properly link those two arguments, I'd remove the full stop in the middle and replace with a semicolon.
- Design: "The war term "Mend and Make Do" really" - when you have a quote within a quote like this, swap the quotation marks for the interior quote and replace with apostrophes.
- Cite #14: There's actually a Template:Cite tweet for that.
- That's the lot - I knew it was just going to be nitpicks from the first read through. Placing on hold as normal. Miyagawa (talk) 11:10, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
Done for everything - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:25, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Great, happy to promote to GA. Miyagawa (talk) 18:21, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
