Talk:Moulsecoomb

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Hassocks5489 in topic Map

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The text of this article as it stands is essentially word-for-word from here. I will attempt a re-write... Hassocks5489 12:33, 22 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

I've done a bit of tweaking, in particular removing an unreferenced comment (with a citation request tag) out of the intro, which looked bad. I've put a geographical note into the intro instead. Perhaps too much detail about roads for an intro, but not a big problem I don't think.
We could really do with saying something about what Moolscoomb Place actually is, and its history, and perhaps providing a photo of the building. – Kieran T (talk) 13:02, 22 March 2007 (UTC)Reply
Good to see you back in circulation, Kieran. I have just spent my lunch hour rewriting the first part, which I am just going to dump into the article now. I can probably sort out a pic of M. Place sometime next month. More rewriting will come when I get a chance - probably this evening... Hassocks5489 13:57, 22 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

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Because the descriptions of all the different parts of Moulsecoomb are a bit confusing, I might try to draw a diagram or map. Perhaps "Before and After" might be particularly useful ... I'll see. Knowing how long it took me to draw this puts me off slightly! Hassocks5489 13:07, 29 May 2007 (UTC)Reply