Talk:MDNA World Tour (album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 14:08, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Wikilinks and external links

Disambiguation pages

• Dablinks doesn't list any.

External links

• Eleven external links to correct. (Checklinks)
  • Chicago Tribune exists, don't know why the tool says its expiring
  • Same for India Today although I read somewhere that Wikipedia tools are blocked by that corporation hence the soft 404 return code
  • Adelaide also, they require cookies and Wikipedia does not provide them
  • The same goes for the Amazon websites, too. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 14:32, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Prose

• Comment: The prose is near excellent, if you ask me.

Lead section

• "the performances at the American Airlines Arena in Miami, Florida during the North American leg of The MDNA Tour was documented" → were
• "It was directed" → substitute 'it' with 'The recording'
• "Blue-ray" → mistyped
• "platinum certifications Canada and Portugal" → missing 'in'
• Does the Billboard Top Music Videos chart measure sales only in the US or other countries are also there? If it's exclusive to the US, could you put the sentence regarding this chart next to the United States and United Kingdom sentence?

Background and tour

• "MDNA was the twelfth studio album by American recording artist Madonna, released on March 23, 2012, by Interscope Records." → "On March 23, 2012, Madonna released her twelfth studio album, entitled MDNA, by Interscope Records"

Development and release

• Nothing to address.

Critical reception

• As the last part of this section is more about the general public's reaction to the malfunctioning discs, could you please change the title to "Reception"?

Chart performance

• Please change the section title to "Commercial performance".

Original research and reliable sources

• "Madonna spent six months personally editing the video footage from 30 cameras and many different shows to put together the MDNA DVD. Her attention to every frame, every detail and nuance and total commitment to show her creative vision has been done to perfection. Each song is like a short movie. One minute you are in an action movie and the next you're at a golden era musical before shooting across to India and back for a house party to finish. It's better than any 3-D Imax movie out there and at a break neck pace that would make any Olympian struggle for breath." → In addition to being a primary source (Madonna.com), the comments are of a promotional nature and I don't think the article has place for this. Maybe change to a quick sentence saying that she spent six months editing and anything more that you find interesting, but the full quote is unnecessary and uneven.
• "ostensibly a concert film" → I see this as being redundant.

Track listing

• Where are tracklistings for other formats?

Release history

• What page says CD-R? prism △ 14:08, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Hi @Prism:, I have addressed all of the other issues, except the one about the track listing. Actually all of the formats have the same tracklist, hence I'm wondering what to add for the extra tracklists. I did mention the formats if you check. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 16:16, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

The DVD and Blu-ray should be put into only one tracklist though (collapsed). prism △ 16:34, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

@Prism:, I added the extra track list, does this look fine now? —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 16:56, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

It's all good now. Passing prism △ 17:02, 9 February 2014 (UTC)