Talk:Mónica Ramírez (activist)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by SquareInARoundHole in topic NPOV issues


NPOV issues

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This page reads like a cross between a CV and an op-ed. The "Early Life and Education" section is full of trivial (at best) biographical information, while the "Querida Familia Letter" section is extremely biased, and even uses first-person, as if the author were Ramírez herself. There's inconsistency in naming throughout: is it "Mónica Ramírez," or is it "Monica Ramirez"? This article needs some considerable straightening-out. GeraldFordsEconomics (talk) 03:42, 3 January 2021 (UTC)GeraldFordsEconomicsReply

I've taken some time to start to work on this article. It needs a rewrite, but for now, I cleared up a lot of unsourced material that, and much of what had a very promotional tone. I'll come back to this again for a rewrite when I have a couple of days off of work. SquareInARoundHole (talk) 19:54, 16 March 2022 (UTC)Reply