Talk:Jonathan Veitch
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editHow is this guy not notable? He's a current college president, and many current college presidents have their own entries. Plus, he has also written some books. Purplebackpack89 (talk) 06:21, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
134.69.4.156's edits
edit134.69.4.156, which is an Occidental College IP range, apparently copied the article directly from an Oxy web page, [1]. Comparing his last edit and the text there, they are virtually the same. We need to change it up a little, and add more outside/non-Oxy references. Probably when he's invested on the 24th, there will be an article about him in the LA Times.
Purplebackpack89 (talk) 23:18, 6 October 2009 (UTC), an Oxy student and the guy who started the Veitch article in first place
- Well, my suggestion is to revert back to this revision. It's clear enough that 134.69.4.156 has added the copyrighted material. Minimac (talk) 21:28, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
Controversy over handling of sexual misconduct cases at Occidental
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editPart of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. Please see the Reply quotebox below for additional information regarding your request. |
I'm User:Edgewood2048 and I work at Occidental College. This bio doesn't appear to have had any significant updates in at least three years. To make it more up-to-date and less random, I’d like to propose some additions. I have used the wiki bios of other liberal arts college presidents as a model, including Carolyn “Biddy” Martin of Amherst; Valerie Smith of Swarthmore; and Clayton Spencer of Bates. However, I want to make sure that I follow WP:COI and gather as much consensus for these changes as possible. So I'm posting my proposals here to solicit input. All proposed additions are in bold.
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Early Life and Education Veitch attended Loyola High School in Los Angeles before he received his bachelor's degree from Stanford University in English and American Literature. After graduation, he traveled across the country for a year, working on a dairy farm in Nebraska, on a Mississippi tugboat, and loading fish in Gloucester, Massachusetts. Source: https://peterholslin.wordpress.com/2008/01/26/jonathan-veitch-dean-of-eugene-lang-college-will-step-down/, accessed 3 January 2018. He later received his doctoral degree in the History of American Civilization from Harvard University.[1]
Veitch was named dean of the New School’s Eugene Lang College in 2004. During his four years as dean, he was credited with expanding the ranks of the college’s full-time faculty, and creating new partnerships with New York cultural institutions and civic engagement programs. Source: https://peterholslin.wordpress.com/2008/01/26/jonathan-veitch-dean-of-eugene-lang-college-will-step-down/ accessed 3 January 2018. He stepped down to become president of Occidental College in 2009.[4]
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Thanks for your help with this.
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I'm User:Edgewood2048 and I work at Occidental College. As President Veitch has announced his decision to step down from the presidency in June 2020, it seems an appropriate time to propose some updates. I also am proposing some changes to the narrative structure of the Occidental College section in an attempt to provide a more logical flow. I continue to use the wiki bios of other liberal arts college presidents as a model; as before, I want to make sure that I follow WP:COI and gather as much consensus for these changes as possible. I'm posting my proposals here to solicit input.
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Thanks for your help with this. Edgewood2048 (talk) 00:08, 25 January 2020 (UTC)Edgewood20148
- @Jkfp2004: Thoughts? You and I laid a lot of the groundwork for this article pbp 02:18, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
There are some of these changes that I'm not a big fan of. They seem to be more about Occidental than Vietch himself. pbp 15:26, 25 January 2020 (UTC)