Talk:John T. Jacobsen

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Arconning in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 15:50, 27 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 73 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:39, 21 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Nice work. Some minor issues. First, should the hook specify that it is the first racially integrated public housing development to match what the sources say? Also, in J. Lister Holmes, I read In 1940, he was tasked by the Seattle Housing Authority to serve as the chief architect of the Yesler Terrace development, the first public housing development in the United States. That doesn't sound right, given that the hook is referring to it as the first racially-integrated one? Clear these two things up and it should be good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:25, 22 August 2024 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:30, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 12:59, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Will start a review in a few days^ Arconning (talk) 12:59, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Generalissima Here is my very short review! Arconning (talk) 13:12, 20 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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  • No issues.

Biography

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  • and received a Danish knighthood., omit "a".
    • Removed. - G
Personal life
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  • In 1931, Jacobsen married Priscilla Chase in Peterborough, New Hampshire. They had twin daughters before Priscilla's death in California in 1942., would it be more appropriate to use "Chase" rather than "Priscilla"?
    • Well she wouldn't be named Chase anymore, would she? - G

Works

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  • No issues.

Media

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  • Images are relevant and are properly licensed.

Refs

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  • Refs used are reliable and supplies the correct information for each statement.

Misc.

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  • No ongoing edit war, broad information about the subject, neutral.
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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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