Talk:Jailson Mendes

GA Review

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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 15:42, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:50, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Looking good for the most part. Watch the "quote the newspaper" issue and maybe find some better words than "calm". Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:01, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

• Mendonça was invited to act in pornographic films while he was in São Paulo, and ended up making three of them Remove comma WP:CINS
• Although he initially feared the repercussions, Mendonça calmed down after some time. Not terribly idiomatic: try rewording. Can you suggest some alternatives for "calmed" both in lead and in body? Maybe he was unsettled at first? Uneasy with being so visible?
• The first of them was made for a minimum wage fee, and the last for one hundred reais Remove unneeded comma.
• In one of these films, Maybe split this long sentence?
• On 29 June 2018, Mendonça suffered a heart attack and was taken to Planalto Hospital in São Paulo, but died shortly thereafter. Remove comma after Paulo
• Check quotes for MOS:LOGICAL, even in sentence fragments.

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 2, 3, 5

• The "embody an even more convincing 'bear'" quote is not Mendes's words; it's the publication. Attribute.

Images

• A fair-use image of the meme or Mendes may be useful here. Since Mendes is dead, any reasonable image would be valid with an NFUR.

@Sammi Brie: thanks! I think everything has been applied! Skyshiftertalk 19:36, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 01:03, 5 February 2025 (UTC)

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• Comment or view
• Article history

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• ... that Jailson Mendes had to gain weight for his first porn film?
  • ALT0a: ... that a bear had to gain weight for his first porn film?
  • ALT1: ... that Jailson Mendes entered the porn industry after a couple randomly approached him?
  • ALT2: ... that a porn star's "hysterically bizarre performance" became one of the most widely spread memes in Brazil?
  • ALT3: ... that a porn star received the nickname "Family Man"?
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sugya
  • Comment: Driveby nom. ALT0a is intended for April Fools' Day.

Improved to Good Article status by Skyshifter (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 266 past nominations.

Launchballer 15:38, 7 January 2025 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Recent enough good article, at least at the time of nomination. I think ALT0a would be good for April Fools Day. Pass. Lazman321 (talk) 02:42, 4 February 2025 (UTC)