Talk:India at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 13:41, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 14:18, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this in a few days! Arconning (talk) 14:18, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

@Magentic Manifestations Here shall be my comments for now! Arconning (talk) 12:38, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

• Use of Games or games needs to be consistent, stay with one. Y

Lead and infobox

• I'd suggest to follow other "Nation at the Summer Olympics" articles and start with "Nation competed at the [Year] Summer Olympics in..." to maintain consistency.Y
• The India team to The Indian team? Y
• City in infobox needs to be changed. Y
• Remove unnecessary parameter for female athletes as there are none. Y

Background

• Dates of the Games needs to be added and cited here. Y
• The nation made its first Winter Olympics appearance until the 1964 Winter Olympics held in Innsbruck, Austria., this should be reworded The nation made its first Winter Olympics appearance at the 1964 Winter Olympics held in Innsbruck, Austria.. Y
• There was a conflict between the Indian Olympic Association and the Indian Army, add a comma at the end. Y
• which employed Singh as to who would accompany him to the games, which resulted in a travel delay., this kind of confuses me, could you reword? Please check if it is ok now.
• with his coach former olympian skier Nadeem Iqbal., this should be reworded to with his coach, Olympic-skier Nadeem Iqbal. From my knowledge, an Olympian is always an Olympian as they've participated at an Olympics, whether it's a past one or not. Y
  • This isn't worded properly yet. Missed the second part. Now it is done.
• When referring to the "Olympics", it should use "were" rather than "was". The 2018 Winter Olympics was held in Pyeongchang to The 2018 Winter Olympics were held in Pyeongchang. Y

Cross-country skiing

• participate in the Men's 15 km classical distance event, uncapitalize. Y
• at the qualifying event held, at a qualifying event held Y
• in the Winter Olympic Games., at the Winter Olympic Games.. Y
• Dario Cologna of Switzerland, add a comma before this statement. Y

Luge

• The event was held on 10-11, The event was held from 10 to 11.... Y

Media

• Both the flag and the image of the athlete have proper licenses, are relevant to the article, and have suitable captions.

Refs

• Earwig seems okay. Hold for source checks.
• Random source checks: 1, 9, 18, 22, 39, 41. All good.
• Should add which site published the info on 26. Y

Misc.

• No ongoing edit war, focused and broad enough information, neutral.

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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