Talk:Independent Cartel of Acapulco

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Cameron Dewe in topic Lead section is too long and detailed


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This will serve the article well. It's about the cartel violence in Acapulco, and how it might resemble the future for Mexico's drug war. It's also about the gang's history and some important arrests. [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12]ComputerJA (talk) 18:06, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lead section is too long and detailed

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I added clean-up tags Lead too long and Lead extra info to highlight that this article's lead section is too long, very detailed and has extra information that is not included in the body of the article. The lead should introduce and summarize an article, not contain half the details of the article. Keep the first sentence but the remainder of the lead is too much detail and should be moved ito the body of the article. See MOS:LEAD. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 06:38, 9 December 2023 (UTC)Reply