Talk:Imperial Bottle Shop & Taproom/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 01:04, 28 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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  • The separate section on description doesn't make sense, it's contents can be better integrated in the sections on history and reception. The first line seems to belong in history and the rest in reception.
  • The use of present perfect seems a bit odd for quotations in the section on description, could just use past tense as the quotations made at a specific point in time.
  • The line on George Floyd should probably mention the nature of vandalism (as that appears vague), the owners' response and specify that protesters did it.
  • "Outdoor seating had returned at both locations by September 2020." Past tense (i.e "was") makes more sense then using past perfect (i.e "had") here.
  • "The bar closed on March 19." Not sure this is verifiable from the citation, can you double check?
  • "GlüBar returned in 2021." Should probably specify that it was closed due to pandemic restrictions?

Assessment

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  1. Comprehension: The comprehension is good.
  2.   Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (prose) The prose is clear and concise, minor issues exist.   Neutral
    (b) (MoS) The article is compliant with the manual of style.   Pass
  3. Verifiability: The article is verifiable.
  4.   Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) The article has a list of references and in line citations for all material in the body, one potential issue exists.   Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) Sources used are reliable.   Pass
    (c) (original research) No original research found.   Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) No copyright violation or plagiarism found.   Pass
  5. Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive.
  6.   Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) The article covers all major aspects, minor issues exist.   Neutral
    (b) (focused) No unnecessary deviations are present.   Pass
  7. Neutrality: The article is neutral.
  8.   Pass
    Notes Result
    The article is compliant with the policy on neutral point of view.   Pass
  9. Stability: The article is stable.
  10.   Pass
    Notes Result
    No ongoing edit warring or content disputes.   Pass
  11. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.
  12.   Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) Images used are appropriately tagged,   Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) Captions are suitable.   Pass