Talk:Hide and Q/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ed! in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 05:08, 17 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • You'll need to note that this is part of the first season of the series.
  • The lead should be expanded a little to include more background information about the episode. I like the way people are writing up the articles on The Office with a note about where its broadcast, some brief background on the show, the subplots, and a little more detail about critic responses.
  • In Production: "...proved to be a turning point for the series in how scripts were produced." -- how was this?
  • The article should note the next time de Lancie returns to reprise the role of Q.
  • In "Reception," there's no information about the market share or viewership of the episode when it first aired.
  • You mention the guest actors in the infobox, but their roles there are not cited. Would be best if you added the roles next to the names in the "Production" section.
  • "Star Trek: The Next Generation actor Wil Wheaton reviewed the episode for the Huffington Post..." when did this review take place? Obviously after the series ended.
  • Dup link tool returns two results: "Q (Star Trek)" and "Star Trek: The Original Series."
  • Dab links shows no disambiguations. Checklink tool returns no errors with external links.
I am placing the article on hold pending the above comments. —Ed!(talk) 05:17, 17 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Great work here too. Passing GA. —Ed!(talk) 00:04, 20 December 2012 (UTC)Reply