 | HMS Midge (1913) is currently a Warfare good article nominee. Nominated by simongraham (talk) at 18:11, 30 December 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article.
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Midge (1913)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 18:11, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 02:30, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Initial comments
edit@Simongraham: I intend to review this article for GA class. I've skimmed it and it looks well-written. Djmaschek (talk) 02:30, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Review 1
edit@Simongraham: Each issue is listed below, together with its location. Please either fix or argue your case for not fixing it. Unless I find something earth-shaking, this seems to be the whole list. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 03:19, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- Criteria: Well-written, Verifiable (spot checked web sources), Broad, Neutral, Stable, Illustrated.
Done - Introduction: "The Acasta class were" > Better: "The Acasta class destroyers were" or "The Acasta class was". Done
- Mismatch: Infobox: Draught = 10ft 6in. Text: Draught = 10ft 5in. Done
- Mismatch: Infobox: Displacement = 936 long tons. Text: Displacement = 892 long tons normal & 1,072 deep load. Done
- Design and development, paragraph 3: "the torpedo tubes and one of the 4-inch guns was removed" > "were removed". Done
- Mismatch: Infobox: Completed = March 1913. Text: Completed = March 1914. (Construction and career, paragraph 1) Done
- Construction and career, paragraph 3: "22:30 hr" > "22:30 hours". (I'm not sure what is commonly done, but hr looks wrong.) Done
- References: The Jellicoe ref is not in alphabetical order. Done
@Djmaschek: Thank you for this review. I concur with all your comments and, hopefully, have made the amendments that are needed. I also added a couple of categories that I think are helpful. Please tell me if there is anything else that you notice. simongraham (talk) 15:25, 2 January 2025 (UTC)