Talk:HMS Crusader (H60)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 06:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Where's the caption for the first pic?
    • Added.
  • "the ship spent"
    • Good catch.
  • Please add   to dates
    • Not required by MOS, otherwise somebody at FAC would have complained about their lac,.
  • What's the "1929 Programme"?
    • Clarified.
  • "sailed to Greenock, Scotland, and" note the comma
    • Agreed.
  • "while 69 survivors were rescued by nearby vessels." passive voice.
    • Fixed.
  • Checklinks reviews 3 damaged links.
    • The links are good, you just need to select which convoy you want to look at.
  • Add alt text to images (strongly recommended).
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:31, 18 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Is there anything left to do here?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:50, 26 October 2011 (UTC)Reply