Talk:Grazing Goat Pictures/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:50, 25 May 2015 (UTC)

I should have this to you by tomorrow JAGUAR  18:50, 25 May 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "Its first film OMG – Oh My God!, was banned in UAE and Malaysia" - I would write out United Arab Emirates fully here
• "In India a few screenings of the film had to be cancelled and a police case was lodged against the filmmakers and actors for hurting religious sentiments" - might read better as A few screenings of the film had to be cancelled in India and a police case lodged against the filmmakers and actors for harming religious sentiments
• The lead meets WP:LEAD and the GA criteria, though I would mention a little more on the production house's history in order to fully summarise
• "The film received poor initial collection at the box office[15] but because of word of mouth it picked up and proved to be a commercial success" - this claim of success due to word of mouth is unreferenced, though I stand wrong if it's in one of the other citations. Also it might be better to replace "because" with "due to"

References

• No dead links

Close - promoted

I couldn't find anything major enough to constitute putting this on hold - so I'll promote this now. It is overall well written, well referenced and the article is broad, thus meeting the GA criteria. Well done! JAGUAR  11:07, 26 May 2015 (UTC)