Talk:Grammy Award for Best Concept Music Video/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:12, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:12, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found.

• Ref #2 is acting oddly, not sure why. Maybe it's the www2; would it go to the right page with just the www?

Corrected. Never had problems with the site before, but "www" seems to be working just fine. --Another Believer _(Talk) 16:17, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• "Best Video, Short Form and Best Video Album" Presuming the awards are two separate ones with Best Video, Short Form all being one award then make that clearer. (maybe 'and was replaced by two awards:...') This is cleared up in the background section but is a bit jarring in the lead; I thought there were three awards originally.

Corrected. Now states: "This category was discontinued with the establishment of the MTV Video Music Awards in 1984 and was replaced with two awards: Best Video, Short Form and Best Video Album." --Another Believer _(Talk) 16:17, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Those are the only couple problems I had; I'll put this on hold and I'll give you 30 minutes to fix them or else this will be failed. (I kid of course, I'll just pass this whenever the above is handled) Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:30, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much for your assistance! --Another Believer _(Talk) 16:17, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

This looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:51, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

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