Talk:Go woke, go broke

Latest comment: 1 month ago by 2604:3D09:C77:4E00:A06A:9F48:1080:74 in topic Poorly written

Heavy Bias - Poor exploration of subject

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This article is a classic example of writer bias and exemplifies strong unfamiliarity with comprehension of literary neutrality; this article is an emotionally-charged parallel of a grade-school journal entry. Strongly recommend deletion or overhaul of article by someone more competent and familiar with construction of literature for encyclopedic purpose. 35.33.138.240 (talk) 15:36, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

For the first time, I think someone would have been better off letting AI speak for them. Daniel Case (talk) 22:35, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Poorly written

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In particular, this sentence:

When conservatives boycotted various companies in 2023, such as Bud Light, Target, and The Walt Disney Company, they experienced a loss in sales and stock value drops,

The "they" suggests conservatives experienced a loss in sales, when the object of the comment is the companies, and also suggests 'conservatives' are an actual organization. Suggest a rewrite to something like:

When conservative commentators encouraged boycotts of Bud Light, Target and The Walt Disney Company in 2023, those companies experienced notable losses in sales and stock value declines.

2604:3D09:C77:4E00:A06A:9F48:1080:74 (talk) 12:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)Reply