Talk:George Tutill

Latest comment: 1 month ago by It is a wonderful world in topic GA Review

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Nominator: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 18:24, 17 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply


This is a neat little article about a topic and person which I know nothing about! I'm looking forward to reviewing! It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi @Unexpectedlydian, I love your name btw!
I have begun the review. I have a concern about the reliability of one of the sources which I addressed below. I'll hold off on the prose review until this has been addressed. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:43, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4)  clock

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Lead

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Definitely include that he was English/British. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Early life

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Founding and overview of business

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International business

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Style and reception

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Personal life

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Death and legacy

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Health/formatting (Criterion 2a)  clock

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No broken URLs, I would recommend adding archive links for the two anonymous sources, as they will be really hard to find if the URLs go down. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

The "Works cited" section has a duplicate of "The art and ideology of the trade union emblem" source. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reliability (Criterion 2b)  clock

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Mostly books from reliable publishers, with less reliable sources used to fill in only minor details. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

My only concern is the reliability of Roger Logan's "East Riding to East End" which seems to be self-published? It read like a reliable source, but I cannot find any references to the work, nor any information about Roger Logan being a subject expert. I'll hold off on the prose review until this concern is sorted out, since if it doesn't qualify as a reliable source that will significantly reshape the article. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Earwig finds no too close paraphrasing or violations. Will check further on the spot check. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b)  clock

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Stable (Criterion 5)  Y

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This interesting website has an image for Tutill, do you have any idea where it's from? If we can find its original source, it would be a great image for the infobox. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Tags (Criterion 6a)  Y

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Captions (Criterion 6b)  clock

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Two examples of banners manufactured by Tutill for the Court Pride of Onehunga, Ancient Order of Foresters.

Link "biblical story of Zacchaeus" It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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