- Parse out known biography from Egerton's conclusions about it. Then we can have an "Early life" section that's reasonably fleshed out, and the controversial part can be handled separately.
- NPOV the Impact section, which implies among other things an active policy choice made by planters (and somehow only after this rebellion, which is unlikely).
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