Talk:Founder CEO
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Draft feedback
editHi! You did a good job at explaining what is a founder CEO, and including examples as well. I would include some interesting statistics like the majority of founder CEOs either get replaced or have to step down, "54% had replaced founder CEOs" Source. I suggest adding more information since it looks a little sparse, but good job! Salinatam (talk) 22:00, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
Hi! Interesting topic you've chosen! A few things jump out in terms of getting this ready for mainspace:
- As illustrated by the numerous, small sections, it's very disjointed... more of a collection of individual facts than an article that one would read from start to finish.
- The lead section should be an overview of the entire article, and should be 1-4 paragraphs. If someone reads just that lead, they should have a clear idea of all the main topics that the rest of the article covers in more detail.
- Section titles should not use title case; only capitalize the first word, unless it's a proper noun.
- The Criticism section doesn't make sense to me.