Talk:Es ist euch gut, daß ich hingehe, BWV 108/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Coming to this soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• his second cantata cycle Readers may not at once understand what this means

linked now --GA

• coming of the spirit I am not well-acquainted with Christian lore, so unless "the spirit" is something that would be known to lay Christians, I would like this to be clear on what "the spirit" means

linked now, hope that helps

• (alto, tenor and bass, I think the bracket should close after "bass"?

yes --GA

• for the desiring heart Could this be clearer?

summary for "The word "Herz" (heart) is rendered in sighing motifs, intensified by following rests." - could you help?

Alright, I get it now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

History and words

• The majority of the first para looks unsourced.

repeated --GA

• a new librettist Christiana Mariana von Ziegler Comma after "librettist"

yes --GA

• although we do not know for sure when he began work on them "it is not known" is the more common way to write this on WP, I think

yes --GA

• Maybe link "movement"

done, lead already --GA

Music

• the mood of greieving at parting I think it should be "grieving", unless you are strictly quoting from a source

yes --GA

• St Matthew Passion Another cantata? Should be clearer

the link to the piece is from the aria --GA

That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:29, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, again! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:40, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Happy to promote. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)