Talk:Dr. Gillespie's Criminal Case
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Skaizun in topic Poor writing
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Poor writing
editThe entire Wikipedia entry is poorly written, with little in the way of information, synopses, or even decent grammar. For example, in the following sentence from the "Plot" section:
"One nurse dies of erysipelas, while and four children successfully recover."
The phrase "while and four children" makes no sense, and implies that something was meant to follow the word "while" (e.g., "while (somebody) and four children . . . ").
Someone familiar with the film should correct and expand this entire entry (n.b., The 1974 Mel Brooks' film, "Blazing Saddles," mentions the "Dr. Gillespie Killings" at, approximately, the 10 minute mark). Skaizun (talk) 22:35, 25 February 2022 (UTC)