Talk:Disappearance of Amy Lynn Bradley

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jeanne boleyn in topic Article needs some major clean up

Dr.Phil photo

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Has the woman in this photo been identified to be her? the sentence presumes it is her.92.0.40.230 (talk) 22:28, 30 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

I did some digging around and you can find the page in the Internet Archive where those "Dr.Phil"/escort ad pictures came from (they're in the link - semi-NSFW)

https://web.archive.org/web/20040609231557/http://www.affordable-adult-vacations.com/guest_escorts_entertainers.htm

^The earliest the pictures were posted was in Jun 04. She would have been be approx. 30 at that time, but the girl in the pictures looks older than 30 IMO


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Article needs some major clean up

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I did some basic copyedit, removed some conflicting information, and tried to clean it up as best I could. But this article still has major issues that go beyond my editing skill. Right now it reads like article on some true crime second rate website rather than a proper encyclopedic article.DragonFury (talk) 21:25, 22 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

I did a bit of cleanup but it really needs a major rewrite. Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:04, 20 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

I agree with DragonFury - this article is a hot mess right now.

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I added a couple of citation requests and then just gave up because editor CocoaBeens (I'm sorry, I don't know how to tag/link to someone or even if we're supposed to) has added a lot of conjecture that I'm not even sure how to address. I didn't want to just start deleting things that didn't make sense; my changes in the years I've been an editor have been almost entirely limited to grammar and mechanics. But this article, at this point, really does read like a tabloid. Tyrnill (talk) 04:47, 12 February 2022 (UTC)Reply