Talk:Desmond J. Scott/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:25, 7 February 2021 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:25, 7 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs
  • No single-sentence paragraphs
  • Link stock agent
  • When did he join the Terries?
  • hyphenate night fighting, etc.
  • and becoming a flight
  • I gather that he was almost immediately promoted to flight lieutenant after being commissioned? And then to squadron leader a month or two after that. Pretty damn quick, even for wartime.
  • Turns out that was in error, I have gone back and revised this with the new source I found. The gap between promotions is much greater now - none the less, he was still promoted pdq, going from pilot officer to group captain in two and a half years.
  • Curiously abbreviated post-war career in the RAF. Any idea why?
Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review. I have responded above and with edits here. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:28, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Reply