Talk:David Gaiman

Latest comment: 7 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Unsubstantiated superlative and sloppy writing

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I propose that "In 1986 the company had become a major supplier of vitamins, with 9 employees and an annual turnover of over £263,000" should read "In 1986 the company had 9 employees and an annual turnover of over £263,000" since a) the event did not happen in just one year and b) neither of the statistics quoted support the assertion of "major supplier" - in fact these are quite average numbers for a specialist retailer/manufacturer in the food supplement business. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.16.130.17 (talk) 08:05, 2 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

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