Talk:Crumbl Cookies

Latest comment: 6 months ago by Lindseybean28 in topic Wiki Education assignment: College Composition II

Advertisement/promotional article - needs significant rewriting

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This article reads far more like an advertisement rather than any kind of substantive, informative article. Citations are missing from provable, factual statements (such as the receipt of rewards, for example). Furthermore most of the text is empty promotional material - look at this line, for example:

"Crumbl’s tech-driven approach to cookies offers its customers a new experience in cookie-eating."

Does it? By what standard? Who says this? Why? 2604:3D08:A284:7E00:5D02:3089:75D5:879A (talk) 20:23, 30 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Reversions of promotional content

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I've reverted multiple additions of promotional content. Let's discuss. Valereee (talk) 00:49, 19 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Pinging @Benstevepete and @Wikiuser114489 Valereee (talk) 00:54, 19 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Undisclosed paid editing

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Per policy, all paid editors must disclose. Valereee (talk) 01:03, 19 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: College Composition II

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 16 January 2024 and 11 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kayprender (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Lindseybean28 (talk) 21:25, 9 May 2024 (UTC)Reply