Talk:Cherry on Top

Latest comment: 1 day ago by Crouch, Swale in topic Requested move 21 December 2024


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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:13, 3 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • and produced by → I think "while production was handled by" sounds better here, but it's your choice
Done
  • A corresponding music video → "accompanying" would fit better here
Done
  • and released on 20 April 2014 → and premiered simultaneously with the single's release
Done

Infobox

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  • Flawless ;)

Background and composition

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  • and produced by → same as in the lead
Done
Done

Critical reception

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  • and "3 Chances" → and album track "3 Chances" (for context)
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  • calling it party of Wish Bone's "magically imaginative mental joyride" → I don't really know what "party" should mean here
Done – fixed; my bad. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).Reply
  • He liked that the song "display[ed] → say "recording" here for alternation
Done

Music video

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  • the cinematography was orchestrated by → "orchestrated" is the wrong word here
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  • Were the three short films eventually made? If not, you can state at the very end of the paragraph something like: "Plans remained unmaterialized"
Done

Personnel

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  • from Wish Bone liner notes → from the liner notes of Wish Bone
Done

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

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  On hold for 7 days. Great job! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:57, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

Cartoon network freak – All done. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).Reply
Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:26, 10 September 2017 (UTC)Reply
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Requested move 21 December 2024

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Cherry on TopCherry on Top (Oh Land song) – Pageviews lean towards the Bini song being the primary topic, but this could be attributed to WP:RECENTISM. In any case, a non-charting 2014 song with just 15 cited references, most of which are album reviews, is definitely not more notable. NØ 16:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)Reply