Talk:Buddy diving

Latest comment: 7 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Merge with buddy line

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Buddy line has been an unsourced one-liner since 2012. Buddy diving is the context for this equipment.• • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 11:00, 24 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

No comments in over a month, so have done the merge. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 15:33, 29 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Assessment for B-class

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B
  1. The article is suitably referenced, with inline citations. It has reliable sources, and any important or controversial material which is likely to be challenged is cited. Any format of inline citation is acceptable: the use of <ref> tags and citation templates such as {{cite web}} is optional.

  2. There are quite a few missing citations. Most are for uncontentious matters, but a few need to be provided. Not complete, but good enough.  Y
  3. The article reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies. It contains a large proportion of the material necessary for an A-Class article, although some sections may need expansion, and some less important topics may be missing.

  4. Looks fairly comprehensive.  Y
  5. The article has a defined structure. Content should be organized into groups of related material, including a lead section and all the sections that can reasonably be included in an article of its kind.

  6. Structure looks good.  Y
  7. The article is reasonably well-written. The prose contains no major grammatical errors and flows sensibly, but it does not need to be "brilliant". The Manual of Style does not need to be followed rigorously.

  8. Looks OK.  Y
  9. The article contains supporting materials where appropriate. Illustrations are encouraged, though not required. Diagrams and an infobox etc. should be included where they are relevant and useful to the content.

  10. More images would help, and should not be but surprisingly difficult to find on Commons. I would like to see one of buddy breathing or a rescue of some kind, but accept that this may take a while.  Y
  11. The article presents its content in an appropriately understandable way. It is written with as broad an audience in mind as possible. Although Wikipedia is more than just a general encyclopedia, the article should not assume unnecessary technical background and technical terms should be explained or avoided where possible.

  12. Looks OK.  Y

Not quite there, but near. A few critical references and a few images should do it. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:04, 26 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Added a few refs, most of the rest is fairly self-evident, so will accept at this level. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 16:29, 10 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Added one image. Much of the content is not image friendly so will accept what is there now. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:20, 26 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Promoting to B class. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 16:29, 10 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
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