Talk:Bad Blood (2004)/GA1

GA Review

• Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
• WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
  • I think I got it.
• The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
• World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
• On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
• the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.
• The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
  • He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
  • Explain that in the article iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
    • So, your saying that this ---> "The result of the brawl between Michaels and Triple H gave Bischoff the authority to schedule Triple H and Michaels in a Hell in a Cell match at Bad Blood", isn't explained enough? --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
      • I'm just saying that it should be explained how he got the authority, but I guess it's fine. iMatthew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
        • I know what your trying to say, but Bischoff was the GM and had the authority to do whatever he wanted. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 00:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
• World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
• keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"
• [performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
• Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
• Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
• remove ["killed off"]
• explain a legend vs. legend killer match
  • This is what I wrote: "a match in which a veteran wrestler is scheduled in a match against a younger wrestler."
    • Fine. iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• make it two on one could use better wording
  • "to Orton's aid."
    • Better. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• Jargon for removal: spinning heel kick
• Jargon for removal: Arm trap crossface
• security wall --> security barricade
• Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."
• Intercontinental title again
• Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."
• Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
• Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
  • How should the sentence read?
    • Not sure, try to come up with a way to re-word it. iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• World Heavyweight title, again
• The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.
• Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
  • No, Triple H blocked a piledriver attempt from HBK.
    • Then fix it, as it reads poorly. "counter a drop Michaels" iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
    • Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• Triple H bring the steel steps and hit Michaels with it change to "with them"
• and performed a dove with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest --> and performed a dive with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest
• other on-screen talent should be in the event section
  • There's no room.
    • You have to make room them, move pictures. Because it needs to be in there. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
    • Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• write at the start, that Lita being pregnant was scripted
  • I think I got it.
    • It's fine, could be better, but it's fine. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• World Heavyweight championship, twice again
• World Heavyweight title, thrice again
• This scenario led to Edge to sneak behind Orton and speared him. tense issues
• Intercontinental championship, again
• Canadian Online Explorer should be in italics.
  • Actually, it isn't suppose to be in italics.
    • It is that way in SummerSlam (2003), an FA. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
      • Well, its not listed here per any sort. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• refs are not needed in the results table, and link everything in the table as it is an exception to WP:OVERLINK
• Online World of Wrestling, PWWEW.net, ProWrestlingHistory, have not been proven reliable, so they all need to be replaced
  • This is for GA, not FA.
    • Nothing is ever "just for GA and not for FA." That doesn't exist. They need to be replaced. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
      • Have been replaced. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• the publisher needs to be changed from WWE to World Wrestling Entertainment.

Long list, but you have a week to complete it. Best of luck, iMatthew (talk) 17:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Got everything, but left some comments. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

GA pass. iMatthew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)