Talk:Andy McGuire

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Maineartists in topic NPOV

NPOV

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This page seems like it violates NPOV. It is exceedingly long for a person who isn't that notable. I would say that the list of all this persons degrees and boards/committee's they serve on should be greatly reduced as it isn't relevant. Right now it is written as lightly sourced article that is glowing in its regard for the subject. I think this should be taken a look at. Ximthebest (talk) 18:42, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

I deleted a lot of the extra stuff and got the article down to a more relevant size for its importance. Ximthebest (talk) 19:14, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

It still needs much more removal. The lede alone is 90% unnecessary. I will be truncating and cleaning up much of this article. Maineartists (talk) 21:40, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Reply