Talk:Alex DeBrincat

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Review: June 17, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lead

Can you WL Illinois or is that overlinking?
- Per MOS:OVERLINK and MOS:SEAOFBLUE I would prefer not to link either Illinois or Massachusetts.
DeBrincat's offensive production improved during the COVID-19 pandemic-shortened 2020–21 season. DeBrincat followed this with his first NHL All-Star Game selection in 2022. Can this be expanded upon?
- Expanded both.

Junior

Erie general manager Sherwood Bassin had scouted him for Lake Forest's 8–2 rout... Scouted him for? Don't you mean "had scouted him during..."?
- Fixed.
What was his NHL Central Scouting Bureau mid-term and final ranking? Can this be added? Did his stock rise throughout the season or stay the same?
- Slipped my mind because the Otters website didn't include it. Added now.
Please WL Taylor Raddysh
- Done.

Professional

How was his training camp? How was his development camp/pre-season contests? It may also be important to mention the role trading Artemi Panarin had on the teams roster.
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  - Added, and also found a source explicitly mentioning how Panarin impacted DeBrincat's chances of making the roster.
You could also mention how the Blackhawks faired in the standings during his rookie season.
- Done.

Personal life

DeBrincat is also a DeBrinDad. [4]
- Added with citation to his IG post per WP:ABOUTSELF
He played in a video game tournament for charity in 2020 [5]
- Added.

Sorry for the wait, HickoryOughtShirt?4! Everything has been addressed. — Ghost River 15:23, 16 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

GhostRiver, I just noticed that he's placed in a category for being of Maltese descent but I do not see it mentioned at all in the article. Is there a ref for this? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 16:25, 16 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

HickoryOughtShirt?4 Added a cited statement to "Personal life". — Ghost River 17:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

GhostRiver, thanks. Passing now! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

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